Fireflies
The soft, sweet glows
in warm summer's shadows.
They dance to a silent song
as they move along.
Summer sings with no words,
a timeless song sang by the birds.
And the fireflies freely float
lost in the dark and vote
for the sun to at stay asleep
and wait for tomorrow to weep.
Techniques Used:
- sibilance
- euphony
- assonance
- end rhyme
The soft, sweet glows
in warm summer's shadows.
They dance to a silent song
as they move along.
Summer sings with no words,
a timeless song sang by the birds.
And the fireflies freely float
lost in the dark and vote
for the sun to at stay asleep
and wait for tomorrow to weep.
Techniques Used:
- sibilance
- euphony
- assonance
- end rhyme
Your use of euphony stood out to me, good job. I also liked that you used end rhyme, it flowed really nicely.
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